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A Fight Scene
Mr Tan frowned upon seeing Mr Lim and clenched his fists, blue veins protruding out, like rivers on a map. Uttering a mad roar, he charged towards him like a horse on steroids, fists tucked under his chest. Mr Lim was no gentleman himself, leapt on a table and performed a jumping-front kick. His skills in his days as a taekwondo master had not faltered after all these years, as his foot landed squarely in Mr Tan's face. Mr Tan growled like a Rottweiler with rabis and threw himself onto Mr Lim, punching wildly at him. Mr Lim sniggered menacingly as he dodged his punches as though they were slowed down and swept Mr Tan of his feet and slammed him down with his hundred-pound frame. Before Mr Tan could even get on his feet, Mr Lim performed a flawless three-hundred and sixty degrees turning kick followed swiftly by a back-hook, before finishing off with a punch to his groin. Mr Tan spat into his hand what seemed like crimson blood as he staggered to a table tried to support himself. He heard bells ringing madly in his ears as world was slowly engulfed with darkness...
Mr Lim let out a triumphant roar of victory and spat venom at the eagled-spread body of Tan Choo Meng.
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